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The Bravest Pony ch.1

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It was a beautiful April morning in Equestria, as all the fillies and colts in Ponyvill were getting ready for another wonderful Monday as Ms. Cheerilee's presentation at school is about to begin. But we're not talking about Scootaloo, Applebloom, or Sweetiebelle. We'll be focusing on someone else, Fluttershy.

It all began on a Monday morning at Fluttershy's home in Cloudsdale. She finished her breakfast and was off to Flightschool. She had to be brought there by her mother, as she had trouble flying, which made her an easy target for Billy, Hoops, and Quarterback. "Hey look! It's Klutzershy, and she's being brought here by her mom!" he shouted.
"What a baby!" exclaimed Quarterback.
"Yeah a baby." Hoops joined in.
"Oh please stop, please." Fluttershy quietly chimed in.
"Hey! what did she ever do to you?" shouted a familiar voice, "You'd better back off!"
"Oh look it's Rainbow Crash." Billy called, in a mocking tone. "And she's here to protect her ,girlfriend."  
The three bullies then shared a laugh as Rainbow dash lands with an explosion of rage.
"SHUT YOUR TRAP BILLY!" she shouted. "I'M NOT A FILLY FOOLER!"
Fluttershy, in the midts of an argument, slinked away trying not to be noticed and headed straight to class.


Fluttershy's first period class was english, which she thought was particularly  good at, but today, she saw something that terrified her, her report card, she had gotten an F.
'Oh no!' she thought. 'My mother's going to kill me!'
She just sat there until class ended, then she headed to her next class. Her next class was math, not her favorite subject, and she slightly perked up when she saw what she got, a B minus,
"better than english at least." she sighed miserably. She headed to her third period class, history. She slunk her head the whole time, and as soon as she was handed her report card her teacher, Mrs. Snowflake, told her that she was worried about her.
"What's wrong Fluttershy?" she asked,
"Oh,  it's nothing. It's just that my grades aren't that great, and my mother won't be to happy about them."
"Oh, I'm sorry to hear that. Well, is there anything I could do to help?"
"No it's fine."
The bell rings, signifying the end of class.
"Well, i should get going."
"Oh, okay. Good bye Fluttershy." Snowflake said, as she waved farewell to Fluttershy, she then went to her least anticipated class, P-E.


She disliked it the most because she had to practice flight tricks in-front of , not only the whole class, but also to the three bullies that teased her earlier. The only thing that made this class worth while, was that she was partners with Rainbowdash. Unfortunatly, today was diffrent, she had to be partners with Quarterback. Rainbowdash asked the coach why they weren't partnered, to which he replied "Well, I just thought that she should be with somepony who will, toughen her up." Disappointed, Rainbowdash wished Fluttershy good luck as she went to be parntnered up with Billy. Fluttershy walked quietly -almost scilently- over to Qurterback as he threw a ball at surprise ,another pegasus.
"Ow! hey that hurt, you big bully!" she shouted.
"Ooooh I'm so scared of a dumb 'special player' go back to your retard squad!" he called, in joyful mockery. Surprise ran back to her team in tears as Fluttershy just watched in dispair as she knew she had to be partnered up with him.
"Um... could you be um... a little nicer, please"? she asked, as nervous as ever,
"Okay, and mabey I could be your little slave getting you whatever you want, but no, I'm just going to tease her some more and you can just GET LOST BITCH!"


Fluttershy had tears in her eyes now, she had never been yelled at since her father did after she went to her home late after spending a few hours with the woodland critters on the ground without parental supervision. She ran to the gym, crying from the the mental beat down Quarterback gave her. He knew about the trauma she went through and that he went to far, so he flew after her.
"Wait Fluttershy!" he called. "Please, wait."
Fluttershy didn't listen, she just blindly ran to the gym. She just wanted to be alone, away from the bullying, unaware of what was in-front of her, she ran straight into the coach.
"Oh, *hic* I-I'm s-sorry." she hiccuped, trying to hold the tears back. "I d-did'nt see you".
"Well where the hell are you running to? get back out there." he said, slightny confused. "Fluttershy!" called Quarterback, "Hey, look I'm sorry for yelling at you like that. I was just angry at Billy for stealing my gear from my locker. I didn't mean to snap at you like that". Fluttershy looked up at him in confusion.
"We cool?"
"y-yeah" Fluttershy said, still choking up tears,
"Okay. Hey let's get back on the course. We're still partners".
Fluttershy smiled and walked back to the course with him.
So this idea poped in my head today so I decided to write a fan fic. wish me luck
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prettygirl1234512's avatar
I really like how u wrote that bro